Jack and Jill,
are hipsters still
drink mason Jars of water
Jack Jives by night
his band’s delight
Jill dreams of being a potter
Jack’s day Job sucks
roundabout he mucks
writing Jingles down on paper
Jumbled days slide by
with lone Jailbird sigh
yet still he is a Japer
Jill dreads the morn
John Barleycorn
Jack’s friends are Just so Jerky
in skinny Jeans faded
vintage closet raided
they ate all her tofurky
Jack pops Jam cakes
Jill lovingly bakes
vegan to keep her figure
an idea Jolts bright
Joyful time is right
the market even bigger
Jack and Jill
quite fit the bill
Jolly in a big Joint venture
now Judge and Jury
in capitalist fury
they’ve secured a
fair-trade debenture
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Jump right into the entries in Frizztext’s A-Z Challenge: tagged “J”.
hi ideflex,
I hope you’ll like the result of our collaboration:
http://flickrcomments.wordpress.com/2014/03/19/jackn-jill/
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This is wonderful – love the springy feel to this tune!
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How fun!!!
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Thank you!
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WOW, you’re an amazing Jill of all blog trades!
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Thank you – the first thing that came to mind for J was that old singsong “jelly in a bowl, jelly in a bowl, wiggle waggle, wiggle waggle, jelly in a bowl…” a little less exciting …
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I have my reputation to uphold ;) har har…
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oh if I could sing your clever lyrics
to the song I played today:
https://soundcloud.com/fingerstyle_guitar/sweet-gypsy-bass
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Go for it! I love that sound byte – it put a smile on my face this morning!
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oh I’ve a creative song writer now – that’s what I’ve been longing for so long: your permission, to sing your lyrics: that challenge will make my day today! Actually it’s still night here, but during daylight I’ll send the results to you: my singing on soundcloud – and a blog post with a quotation of your lyrics, my singing – and of course a back link to your page, O.K.?
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changed for the phrasing,
related to the song,
a little bit your poem to:
——————————-
———————
JACK AND JILL
———————
I. – A1
Jack and Jill,
are hipsters still
drink mason
Jars of water
B2
Jack Jives by night
his band’s delight
Jill dreams
of being a potter
CCCCCC3
Jack’s day Job sucks
roundabout he mucks
writing Jingles
down on paper
D4
Jumbled days slide by
with lone Jailbird sigh
yet still he is
a Japer
—————————
II. BASS – A5
Jill dreads the morn
John Barleycorn
Jack’s friends are
Just so Jerky
B6
in skinny Jeans faded
vintage closet raided
they ate all
her tofurkey
CCCCCC7
Jack pops Jam cakes
Jill lovingly bakes
vegan to keep
to keep her figure
D8
an idea Jolts bright
Joyful time is right
the market even
even bigger
—————————-
III. – A9
Jack and Jill
quite fit the bill
Jolly in a big
Joint venture
B10
now Judge and Jury
in capitalist fury
they’ve secured a
fair-trade debenture
CCCCCC3
Jack’s day Job sucks
roundabout he mucks
writing Jingles
down on paper
D4
Jumbled days slide by
with lone Jailbird sigh
yet still he is
a Japer, a Japer
——————–
IV. BASS – A5
Jill dreads the morn
John Barleycorn
Jack’s friends are
Just so Jerky
B6
in skinny Jeans faded
vintage closet raided
they ate all
her tofurkey
CCCCCC7
Jack pops Jam cakes
Jill lovingly bakes
vegan to keep
to keep her figure
D4
Jumbled days slide by
with lone Jailbird sigh
yet still he is
a Japer, a Japer
——————–
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No problem!
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Of course, anytime! I’m thrilled!
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Oh My what a poem, I love this.
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Thank you, had to Joust with those Js to get them to play!
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Glad you liked it – It was great fun composing..
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